Your Flickr analyses of these images is good but there are a couple of issues. Firstly it would have been better to have your images next to the similar images from real texts. If you have time to cut them up and do it this way things would be clearer. Secondly you don't really say enough about the key conventions of the horror genre, or anything, really, about the conventions of trailers. The best way to do this is to add some text directly to the blog post which looks at the Central conventions of each. Poor example you could discuss expressive camerawork, weird angles, canted frames etc and then give a brief example from your own trailer with a still. The central conventions that you should describe the ones on the big A3 sheet about horror as a genre. You should do the same for trailer conventions. You have sheets with these on too.
Your Flickr analyses of these images is good but there are a couple of issues. Firstly it would have been better to have your images next to the similar images from real texts. If you have time to cut them up and do it this way things would be clearer. Secondly you don't really say enough about the key conventions of the horror genre, or anything, really, about the conventions of trailers. The best way to do this is to add some text directly to the blog post which looks at the Central conventions of each. Poor example you could discuss expressive camerawork, weird angles, canted frames etc and then give a brief example from your own trailer with a still. The central conventions that you should describe the ones on the big A3 sheet about horror as a genre. You should do the same for trailer conventions. You have sheets with these on too.
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